VIOLENT CRIME FINAL PIECE
STOP VIOLENT CRIME
Knifes are dangerous and can kill
And they can make people have to write there will
Now i'm being serious
Knives are basically a virus
I'm talking to all the boys now
I'm simpely just saying wow
That you can go around and try to act cool
But really in the inside you are a fool
To everyone who wants to shank
I'm gonna make you walk down the big plank
Which sadly is going to lead you to prison
Just because you have no vision
Of all the people that have died
Just because there was a little collide
Imagine the parents of wounded person
They would be thinking could this worsen
Could I lose another son
Just to a old boy with a gun
Or maybe a daughter
Who could get slaughtered
Knifes are such a shame
And some people think it's a game
Remember Steve Frank the man that was killed on New Years Day
He was only trying to say hip hip hooray
I want you to think about this
And all the names just like Chris
Who really wanted to live a life
But on that day he was stabbd by a knife
Comments (9)
Michael Faraday School 11 Feb 2019
Thanks for the star
Willowtown Community Primary School 12 Feb 2019
GOOD FINAL PIECE
Michael Faraday School 12 Feb 2019
Well done on the star and your final peice!
Michael Faraday School 13 Feb 2019
wow that was actually really good well done for that star mate ✔✔✔
Michael Faraday School 13 Feb 2019
NICE WORK!
Streatham Wells Primary School 13 Feb 2019
I really liked your final piece
Richmond Hill Academy 14 Feb 2019
Amazing rhyming and really good explanation
Well done
St Barnabas C of E Primary School 14 Feb 2019
that is true and your right ,we should try to stop crime
St Barnabas C of E Primary School 14 Feb 2019
listen to the poem ,you know its right
we need to be not worse but always right,
we should stop being naughty and stop violent crime.
so please be good and please be nice
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