Violence, Shame On!

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  • Olivia-Avatar.jpg Olivia @ the BNC
    13 Feb 2019

    A brilliantly presented poem and a really good use of rhyme. Sometimes rhyming words detract from the message as they can feel a bit messy and forced, but I think this has been so well thought through and planned that it is really powerful. I also like how you return to your earlier line at the end. Great work!

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  • Michael-Faraday-logo-250x250.jpg cheerful_leaves | Michael Faraday School
    14 Feb 2019

    Really good poem I loved it!!!

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