A brilliantly presented poem and a really good use of rhyme. Sometimes rhyming words detract from the message as they can feel a bit messy and forced, but I think this has been so well thought through and planned that it is really powerful. I also like how you return to your earlier line at the end. Great work!
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13 Feb 2019
A brilliantly presented poem and a really good use of rhyme. Sometimes rhyming words detract from the message as they can feel a bit messy and forced, but I think this has been so well thought through and planned that it is really powerful. I also like how you return to your earlier line at the end. Great work!
14 Feb 2019
Really good poem I loved it!!!
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