knife slam post

Boys and girls I don't like the sound of all this crime,
It gets on my nerves I would rather spend a dime,
All this chaos would make me wanna cry,
Why don't stop and enjoy the rest of your life,
You wanna have a life full of fun and care,
So why don't stop and have what you want,
Come on, come stop it all,
I wanna hear no more of this crime or knife crime,
I wanna life just like any other person so why don't stop and you'll recieve your reward.
Hope you like my poem/slam post
THANK YOU
Comments (3)
05 Feb 2019
Hi am so sorry I wanted to write more but couldn’t think of anything I will write more in the future
No problem, there's still a couple of weeks left for this Issue, so you might want to come back to this at some point. It would be great to hear some solutions that you think would help to reduce knife crime.
06 Feb 2019
thank you so much for the respect and guess what I will continue this and hopefully you think that it could be good enough for a star THANK YOU
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