Donald's Demands

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Let me ask you one question: if you wanted to go on holiday, would you make someone in another country pay for your flights, the hotel, and the food? Of course you wouldn't!

Now, let me ask you another question: you wouldn't make someone else in another country pay for your holiday, so why would Donald Trump make people in another country pay for HIS wall?

In my opinion, this is absurd. The mexicans have done nothing wrong, and nothing to deserve for TRUMP'S wall.

I believe that the power that Donald Trump has, has gone straight to his head. He is almost abusing his power and using it in unnecessary ways. Donald Trump is 72 years old, therefore he has an old way of thinking. He’s not used to the fact that modern America has equality now. There are rumours that Donald Trump acts the way he does because his father was against some nationalities, and that’s what he’s brought up to believing. Even so, that gives him no excuse to act the way he does. He has already built one third of his wall, and he has still got time to go before more people’s lives are destroyed. Again, I’m going to reiterate my point: why make the mexicans pay for something that HE is building?

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  • Tiff-Avatar.jpg Tiff @ the BNC
    02 May 2019

    Hi spirited_penguin,

    Thanks for your post. You open with a well structured point to draw the reader in!

    One assumption I'd like to question is that around age. Have you assumed that all older people have an 'old way of thinking'? These people are all over 70:

    Al Gore
    Gloria Steinem
    Samuel L Jackson

    How might this point out that your assumption could be wrong?

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    1. Ormiston-Bushfield-logo-250x250.jpg spirited_penguin | Ormiston Bushfield Academy
      Tiff @ the BNC's comment 15 May 2019

      Hi Tiff, I'm really sorry, I totally get your point! I'm going to rewrite that post now:


      Let me ask you one question: if you wanted to go on holiday, would you make someone in another country pay for your flights, the hotel, and the food? Of course you wouldn't!
      Now, let me ask you another question: you wouldn't make someone else in another country pay for your holiday, so why would Donald Trump make people in another country pay for HIS wall?
      In my opinion, this is absurd. The mexicans have done nothing wrong, and nothing to deserve for TRUMP'S wall.
      I believe that the power that Donald Trump has, has gone straight to his head. He is almost abusing his power and using it in unnecessary ways. Donald Trump is 72 years old, therefore he could have an old way of thinking. However, this is in a bad way. Sometimes, having an old way of thinking is good- it depends on what it is that you think about that determines it. That factor influences it, but also, there are rumours that Donald Trump acts the way he does because his father was against some nationalities, and that’s what he’s brought up to believing. Therefore there's potentially a chance that this is just how he's been brought up to think. For example, if your parents tell you when you were little not to throw food, you are going to think that is wrong so won't do it. This is the same situation. He’s not used to the fact that modern America has equality now. . Even so, that gives him no excuse to act the way he does. He has already built one third of his wall, and he has still got time to go before more people’s lives are destroyed. Again, I’m going to reiterate my point: why make the Mexicans pay for something that HE is building?

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