Raj's Detention
This is my opinion on Raj's Detention, I would love if you comment yours!
I really don't think that Raj deserved a detention, simply because the teacher said that she had assumed he had done something wrong and that he was the cause of it.
Also because he is a child that sort of gets picked on, so if he is caught doing something wrong, he will get in trouble for it immediately, with no warning at all.
I think that Ms Townsend did not have any proof of what he had done wrong.
I think that Lisa did shout "LOSER!" not "LOOK OUT" simply because they do not sound the same in any way. Try saying "loser" and then "look out". BIG DIFFERENCE. She wasn't actually very kind anyways....
Comments (4)
Boutcher C of E Primary School 17 Oct 2018
I agree with content lemon about both Mrs Townsend and Lisa. Raj and Lisa's ways of telling the story were quite different however they both had two things in common:
Lisa pushed him in some way
Lisa shouted something.
nether of these things seem very kind to do, even if someone was about to step in dog muck. what kind of person hides behind a tree anyway...
Boutcher C of E Primary School 17 Oct 2018
I agree with content lemon because Mrs Townsend had only assumed it she didn't have a first hand experience while Raj did
St Gregory's Catholic Primary School B 19 Oct 2018
I AGREE WITH YOU FROM OUTSPOKEN_FERRET AND REFLECTIVE_DINOSAUR
Boutcher C of E Primary School 21 Jan 2019
I agree with content_lemon because if you shout loser and then look out then there is not much of a diffrence
and if Lisa was trying to help then it is fine and then the teacher is assuming not knowing but assuming and so therefore Raj does not deserve a detention.
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