Myanmar, a poem

adventurous_pianoStreatham Wells Primary School A 06 October 2018

Myanmar a poem by Adventurous piano

Myanmar sharp tall buildings,

Wounderous lushes green forests,

Trecherous fights and horrible killing,

All people want to do is cut of your wrists!

by aventurous piano

Comments (5)

Olivia @ the BNC
08 Oct 2018

Hi adventurous_piano! How nice to read a poem on the Hub, thank you! It ends in quite a shocking way, and I was just wondering how truthful this ending was, or whether you have used some poetic license?
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shy_context | Michael Faraday School
08 Oct 2018

Yes there is horrible killing out in country's like Myanmar and it isn't right at all
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faithful_dolphin | Stoke Community School
09 Oct 2018

I think people should not have a chance to sufer
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trustful_clarinet | Boutcher C of E Primary School
15 Oct 2018

l think that you are right with all of the rohingya violence which is not just making them suffer but all of the country.
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fairminded_sealion | St Joseph's Catholic Primary School, Northfleet
03 Jul 2019

I like how you used a sort of poetic licence, isn't it? I thought it was going to be a calm, happy poem until I read the shocking end! It's a good way to make people change their perspective of thinking fighting is good in a bad way. Good job!
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