Myanmar, a poem

Myanmar sharp tall buildings,

Wounderous lushes green forests,

Trecherous fights and horrible killing,

All people want to do is cut of your wrists!

by aventurous piano

Olivia @ the BNC
08 Oct 2018

Hi adventurous_piano! How nice to read a poem on the Hub, thank you! It ends in quite a shocking way, and I was just wondering how truthful this ending was, or whether you have used some poetic license?
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shy_context | Michael Faraday School
08 Oct 2018

Yes there is horrible killing out in country's like Myanmar and it isn't right at all
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faithful_dolphin | Stoke Community School
09 Oct 2018

I think people should not have a chance to sufer
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trustful_clarinet | Boutcher C of E Primary School
15 Oct 2018

l think that you are right with all of the rohingya violence which is not just making them suffer but all of the country.
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fairminded_sealion | St Joseph's Catholic Primary School, Northfleet
03 Jul 2019

I like how you used a sort of poetic licence, isn't it? I thought it was going to be a calm, happy poem until I read the shocking end! It's a good way to make people change their perspective of thinking fighting is good in a bad way. Good job!
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