Myanmar, a poem
Myanmar a poem by Adventurous piano
Myanmar sharp tall buildings,
Wounderous lushes green forests,
Trecherous fights and horrible killing,
All people want to do is cut of your wrists!
by aventurous piano
Myanmar sharp tall buildings,
Wounderous lushes green forests,
Trecherous fights and horrible killing,
All people want to do is cut of your wrists!
by aventurous piano
Comments (5)
08 Oct 2018
Hi adventurous_piano! How nice to read a poem on the Hub, thank you! It ends in quite a shocking way, and I was just wondering how truthful this ending was, or whether you have used some poetic license?
08 Oct 2018
Yes there is horrible killing out in country's like Myanmar and it isn't right at all
09 Oct 2018
I think people should not have a chance to sufer
15 Oct 2018
l think that you are right with all of the rohingya violence which is not just making them suffer but all of the country.
03 Jul 2019
I like how you used a sort of poetic licence, isn't it? I thought it was going to be a calm, happy poem until I read the shocking end! It's a good way to make people change their perspective of thinking fighting is good in a bad way. Good job!
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