A POEM THAT COULD CHANGE OUR WORLD?
Why do we do this to each other
Why do bullies always take over
God created this world for all of us to share
But some of us just don’t care
It is not ok to leave people out all on their own
Just becaue of their race and religion
This is not the blessing that we were given
So let’s be better people
So that no-one feels left out
We can do it without a dout
We must do it,mustn’t we?
Comments (4)
Thanks for sharing this poem. On the Hub, all discussion should related to the current Issue and I was wondering whether this was to do with Myanmar? If so, please explain how! If not, please bare this in mind for next time!
St Joseph's Catholic Primary School, Northfleet 09 Oct 2018
I think it's because the Military would be the bullies as they're forcing the Rohingyans to flee. Also the poem toalks about your Race and Kind, the Rohingyans are Muslims and the rest of Myanmar is mainly Budhists. They're not being treated equally. If they start acting towards being equal there wouldn't be all this conflict.
Boutcher C of E Primary School 15 Oct 2018
l think that that poem is very con moving and l love the question tag that's at the end . As it leaves you with a mission in your head.
Boutcher C of E Primary School 15 Oct 2018
I think that this poem is right and humorous_camel is right in that God created this world for all of us to share.
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