A hong kong acrostic poem

positive_potatoFaringdon Community College 10 September 2019

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Hate is all that this debate is concocting

One thing is what the people of Hong Kong want, democracy!

Negotiations should be made

Granted that they are not violent

Killing and-or harming people solves nothing

Only by agreeing can we solve this

No good things will come out of this

Going and stopping the violence can we end these protests

Comments (14)

Tom @ the BNC
11 Sep 2019

Thank you for your poem! I like how you have communicated a strong message in each line and still keep them quite short. In your last line, can you tell us what you mean by 'going'?
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balanced_singer | The Ruth Gorse Academy
11 Sep 2019

I really like your poem.
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receptive_statement | Michael Faraday School
13 Sep 2019

so expressive
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happy_iceberg | Portobello High School
15 Sep 2019

I love this poem i think that youve done a really good job
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1. happy_iceberg | Portobello High School
  happy_iceberg's comment 16 Sep 2019
  
  me to
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2. 1. passionate_dinosaur | Portobello High School
    happy_iceberg's comment 23 Sep 2019
    
    Me to
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tidy_guineapig | Newbury Park Primary School
20 Sep 2019

i really like this poem keep going on.
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strong_tomato | Boutcher C of E Primary School
20 Sep 2019

that poem was amazing!
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1. involved_watermelon | Boutcher C of E Primary School
  strong_tomato's comment 21 Sep 2019
  
  I agree strong tomato
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interesting_library | Michael Faraday School
23 Sep 2019

REMARKABLE!!!!!!!!!!
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interesting_library | Michael Faraday School
23 Sep 2019

BREATHTAKING!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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interesting_library | Michael Faraday School
23 Sep 2019

This is a great poem. Well done
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convivial_shark | Lyons Hall Primary School C
24 Sep 2019

I think so to
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loyal_peach | Evelyn Street Primary School
24 Sep 2019

I really like the poem positive_potatoe
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