Wow! What a brilliant Final Piece. Your presentation style is great and you have clearly taken a long time to draft this and get the tone right. I really like your ending, which is powerful and though-provoking about the type of world we'd get if you were voted in.
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14 Apr 2020
Wow! What a brilliant Final Piece. Your presentation style is great and you have clearly taken a long time to draft this and get the tone right. I really like your ending, which is powerful and though-provoking about the type of world we'd get if you were voted in.
15 Apr 2020
I can not see the video but I think it will be amazing because you won a star
try watching the video now
20 Apr 2020
ThanI you
20 Apr 2020
Sorry I meant thank you
21 Apr 2020
you sounded brilliant, BRAVO.
07 May 2020
This guys from my school!
And my school too and in my year group
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