DO WE GET A SAY ???

enthusiastic_locationBoutcher C of E Primary School 09 March 2019

Why can't we protest,

Are you sure it's for the best?

We can hold a poster high,

So high it can reach the sky?

Is it cause the age we are,

We might have to travel far?

Why aren't we part of the picture,

Can the adults be less stricter?

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mindful_perspective | John Ruskin
11 Mar 2019

I love that your poem has a meaning to it, it has a rhyme to it and you have said what you want through it. I LOVE IT.
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1. enthusiastic_location | Boutcher C of E Primary School
  mindful_perspective's comment 17 Mar 2019
  
  Thanks, I do actually wonder "why we can't as children vote?" We might be able to say more than the adults. We might be the people that can change the adults mind. We could make them stop and think about their decision. Thanks again for your comment!!!
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2. 1. mindful_perspective | John Ruskin
    enthusiastic_location's comment 29 Apr 2019
    
    You are very welcome
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quiet_horse | Arnhem Wharf Primary School
31 Mar 2019

I love your poem! I made a poem too called voting poem. It sounds very similar
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