Posts by resplendent_fish

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The news that gave me joy was, 'This old lady was saved by this dog when she was in the middle... Weekly Competition #21 12/2/19
I agree with you that maybe have a second go and make it a bit better because this just isn’t... Live a life 11/2/19
I think this is very creative but not enough to get a star. Be Yourself 11/2/19
I think you should make paragraphs instead of sentence then new line. BUT I also think this is a... Slam Poem - Violent Crime 11/2/19
‘On camera homeless dog goes and steals people’s food, (in Africa) at local cafe. He had been... Weekly Competition #21 11/2/19
*try to.... 👆 Witnesses: What can they do? 04/2/19
If you are a witness you should use all your proof so that the police can use your proof to find... Witnesses: What can they do? 04/2/19
I think you should write more and read it through before you write it. Children and drugs: Do they match? 04/2/19
I think children and drugs DO NOT match because they kind of make kids use drugs and get ill and... Children and drugs: Do they match? 04/2/19
You need more evidence that criminals aren’t being punished properly because you won’t get a... Weekly competition #19 28/1/19
Where is your evidence that people should stop knife crimes other than ‘bad’ because not how BNC... Weekly competition #19 28/1/19
I think ‘b’ because if you change their behaviour then they will know not to do the wrong thing again. Weekly competition #19 28/1/19
I feel children spend a lot of time wishing for presents, technology and toys (+ more) and they... Weekly Competition #15 15/12/18
your welcome Weekly Competition #14 11/12/18
yes thank you! :) But I do prefer to wright in rhymes as I find it easier to do. But thank you... Banking 11/12/18
well I just new it! Bankers 11/12/18
me too Financial Crises 10/12/18
great comment I love how you've worded It, and you've used the right words to make the sentence... Weekly Competition #14 10/12/18
Banking is important, why do we need loans? why do we need to make things dearer each... Weekly Competition #14 10/12/18
How dose this relate to banks? Weekly Competition #14 10/12/18
Thanks Bankers 10/12/18
thank you Saving! (e.c) 10/12/18
Great comment Weekly Competition #14 10/12/18
I like your comment and is very great worded Weekly Competition #14 10/12/18
Great rhyme and I like the way you worded it. Weekly Competition #14 10/12/18
Can you prove that no one knows that banks aren’t protected or is your money safe! Weekly Competition #14 10/12/18
Great poem! Weekly Competition #14 10/12/18
Banks are important, Banks are a life saver. Banks give you money. Weekly Competition #14 10/12/18
Banks are important, They make sure you have a password to get into your account. (You need... Weekly Competition #14 10/12/18
Banks are important, You need the bank because it can keep your money safe and hidden away from... Weekly Competition #14 10/12/18